The Bite *Part 1*

On a chilly Monday morning, Chris was walking to school as he lives close to a nearby woods. It was a typical morning, walking and listening to music. As he strolls past the woods, he hears a sound. Sounded like weeping. He couldn’t help but to investigate the sound. He goes into the woods as he looks for what could be a person in pain. He hears weeping again. Now he thinks he’s not crazy, he actually hears weeping. As he gets closer and closer, he stumbles across a wounded deer. This deer had a huge bite mark on its stomach. Extraordinary pain this deer was in. Chris felt so bad. He wanted to help. At the same time, he didn’t want to be late to school. Chris decided to turn around and walk off, feeling really bad for leaving the deer behind. As he gets closer to the sidewalk, he’s attacked! An unknown animal jumps on him! Chris somehow had the strength to fight it off and the animal got away. Chris finally makes it to the sidewalk, then he notices a bite mark on his left hand. He was in shock. He was flabbergasted by what had just happened. At that moment though, he just wanted to get to school.

Chris is now sitting in class, but all he could do was stare at the bite mark on his hand. That’s what he did all day. Couldn’t focus on anything, but the bite mark.

As Chris walks home from school, he starts to feel a little dizzy. Nothing too bad. He knew something was up immediately. He knew something was up about the bite mark. Before going to bed later that night, the bite mark began to throb. Chris actually couldn’t sleep as the throbbing was bothering him that much. Tossing and turning all night, because of the bite mark. Finally he goes to sleep. When he woke up, he had missed school due to oversleeping, but that wasn’t his concern at all. He looks at his left hand and couldn’t believe what he had saw. The bite mark became infected! It’s now all red, even covering his fingers in dark red. Chris then rushes to the bathroom and right away he notices his hair is slightly black. Chris had natural blonde hair, so this was unusual for him. Starts to brush his teeth, then he notices he’s developing fangs! At that moment Chris knew, he’s in for a complete makeover. Once he noticed these changes, he had one thing in mind……and that was to confront the unknown animal that bit him…….

Chris’ new objective: Go into the woods and confront the creature….


  1. Geraldine says:

    Wow, nice
    Can’t wait to find out what happens
    Congratulations your nomination

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    1. Shane R. says:

      Stay tuned đŸ™‚ and THANK YOU SO MUCH for the nomination!!


      1. Geraldine says:

        It’s a well deserved nomination

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